Migration, a Natural Process

Karen Jesina says:

Hi Jazmin, Aww wow I really love this! The image is fresh–quite creative for this article and I feel like it works well. It encourages the reader to think about the freedom birds have, and to consider that humans ought to also have this sort of freedom. Beautiful. The image itself is lovely. The birds are facing the text so one’s eye naturally moves from bird to text. The shape of the birds is a triangle and fills the space nicely. The fact that the text is placed into a cloud is the icing on the cake! The font you chose for “Article 13” is light-hearted and almost hand-written which again evokes the thought (for me anyway) that humans are free by nature, like birds. The grey color of the text matches the grey in the birds’ feathers, another thoughtful feature. I feel like the “Article 13” would be more impactful if it were a bit larger. It almost seems like an afterthought in the small corner of the larger photo. As well, the text of the article itself could be larger. I like how you aligned the text of the article with the edge of the number 3 on the right hand side. It creates a nice appropriate border for the eye, mirroring the border that the bird’s wing provides on the left. Overall a really nice job with a beautiful image!