“The Right of Return” by Aedan Bennett, licensed under CC BY-SA 4.0.
This work is a derivative of “Al Nakba – Graffiti – Nazareth” by PRA is licensed under CC BY-SA 4.0 and was edited using Canva.
The Right of Return
“The Right of Return” by Aedan Bennett, licensed under CC BY-SA 4.0.
This work is a derivative of “Al Nakba – Graffiti – Nazareth” by PRA is licensed under CC BY-SA 4.0 and was edited using Canva.
Hi Aedan, I think this is a very moving and impactful graphic. i enjoyed the fonts you chose and how you outlined them in black to make it easier to read. I would maybe add a colored shape behind the text to emphasize the text more and make it clearer to read. Good job!
Hello Aedan, I agree with Emma and found your graphic to be very moving. The image speaks for itself, and perfectly aligns with with your chosen article. I think the fonts you chose go nicely with the handwriting present in the graphic. One change I would suggest is lowering the article text to be in line with the wall, as it going above into the trees is a little visually distracting. Overall wonderful job!
Hi Aedan! I think you did a great job of selecting an image that supported the overall message of the article. Like Emma and Melody stated, the graphic is very moving and the two fonts you chose work well together. The outline added to the text definitely helps the text easier to read which is great. Great job!