Leisure and Rest” by Michelle Taylor is licensed under CC BY-NC 4.0. “Leisure and Rest” is a derivative of “Waterfall” by Michelle Taylor.
Image edited using BeFunky, an online photo and graphic design editor.
“Article 24” is taken from Article 24 of the United Nations Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
Michelle, what a lovely photo! I enjoyed your font selection, especially using the colors from various parts of the image for the text bubble and font colors. This helped the text blend well with the image. I liked the left alignment of the text, and I think the typefaces reflect the overall message, too.
I have a few suggestions for improvement: The top of the heading “Article 24” could use slightly more space from the edge of the image, since the top of the “L” looks like it’s almost getting cut off. And if I had to be extra picky, I would suggest changing one of your fonts to a less serif-y one; they are personally contrasted plenty, but one of the fonts being sans serif might take it a step further.
Hello Michelle, I think your fonts fit very well with your picture- I think they flow like the water. I also think the picture fits very well with your chosen article. I think the nice blue color of the fonts matches your picture, but I do think your text and text bubble are a little too close to the edge, there needs to be more room.
Hey Michelle, I think the font you used for the main text fits well with the picture and the relaxation. The header font is a little small to me, I would make it bigger and maybe less transparent. I think the header font itself also maybe isn’t serious enough for a human rights article, it makes me immediately think menu feel rather than legal rights. I do like the color of the font you chose, you used a light color off of the image that makes it easier to read. The element and font you chose is cut off on the top so the placement isn’t quite right.
Thanks!
Kiani