Spirit of Brotherhood “Spirit of Brotherhood” by Emily Murray is liscensed under CC BY-NC-4.0. “Sprit of Brotherhood” is a derivative of“Four Person Standing at Top of Grassy Mountain” by Helena Lopes, downloaded from Pexels (02/06/2025), some rights reserved. Photo Editor: Adobe Photoshop. “Article 1” taken from the United Nations’ Universal Declaration of Human Rights. Tags: human rights February 6, 2025 by Emily Murray Student Posts 3
Hi, Emily! I love your design! The warm lighting and natural background create a strong feeling of freedom and unity, which fits well with the message of Article 1.
The choice of fonts works well. The bold, rough font for “ARTICLE 1” grabs attention and gives a sense of importance. The clean font for the main text makes it easy to read. However, using a slightly more elegant font for the body text might make the message feel even stronger and more timeless. Right now, the two fonts work together, but a little more contrast could improve the design.
Overall, this is a great design that clearly shares an important message. Nice job!
Hello Emily,
Your work beautifully captures the essence of Article 1 with the image of unity and togetherness. The concept of “the Spirit of Brotherhood” is perfectly illustrated through the four individuals on the mountaintop. It’s a simple yet powerful reminder of the right to equality and the dignity of all people. Your choice of a serene, natural setting adds a layer of peace and harmony to the message.
Great job with the design and the thoughtful editing in Adobe Photoshop to bring everything together! I wish I were also capable of using Photoshop to this extent.
Hi Emily! This is such a warm image. The light beams from the left, creating a glow across the sky. The distressed font you used for “ARTICLE 1” is rugged and speaks to the environment the group is in. I love your use of the space for the text. It captures the feelings of fun you get when you hang out with a group of close friends, encapsulating your derivative’s title, “The Spirit of Brotherhood.” Great job!