Inhuman Treatment “Inhuman Treatment” by Keith Bennett is a derivative of an untitled photo by Sabine van Erp taken on 8/1/2018 which is free to use under the pixabay license. Originally downloaded on 2/5/2022 and edited with BeFunky. Tags: human rights February 5, 2022 by Jane Barrager Student Posts 2
Hi Keith,
What a Strong message in this article. The image has been well composed and the placement of the texts looks good. I also like that you used the principle “CONTRAST” by using Red color for the title “Article 5”. I have a couple of suggestions – 1. You could have cropped the image in such a way that it follows the rule of thirds design principle. But I guess in your case the original image was a close-up shot of the subject so there is no way the derivative could follow this rule. 2. You could have used the design principles “Alignment” and “Proximity” by moving the title in alignment and close proximity to the text. Overall it’s a great piece of work!
Keith,
I think that you did a good job matching your article and an image. The black font against the blue sky stands out well. The red article 5 looks a little blurry, and I think it could have been a stronger font. It did grab my attention though! The article 5 title could be lined up more with the rest of the text. I look forward to more of your work!