compositions

One Little Monkey Jumping On The Bed

The Original (Before):

A toddler jumping on a bed by Pavel Danilyuk is licensed from Pexels under free to use

I choose this image because it made me smile and it brought back a sense of lightheartedness. This toddler is clearly enjoying themselves and is caught mid-jump. My daughter is roughly the age of the toddler in this photo and also enjoys jumping on the bed (or couch, or dog bed) and every time she does I have a big smile on my face. This image is sweet, and soft in its color pallet and lighting, but could benefit from some slight enhancements.

The Derivative (After):

Toddler Jumping on Bed By Nicole Damstetter is marked with CC0 1.0.

I played around with a few composition ideas, like cropping super tight to only the toddler’s feet (looked too creepy), and cropping tight to the toddler’s head (which lost the sense of whimsy not knowing they were jumping) before selecting this final version. I enhanced the original photo, by taking the toddler and adjusting him as the focal point to the left side of the image, per the rule of thirds, creating some more movement and intrigue in the photo. The higher crop removes the side walls from the photo which adjusts the sense of space in the room. Uncentering the toddler creates a sense of intrigue, is the toddler jumping towards something or someone on the other side of the bed? Will that person or pet catch them? The focus of the photo is clearly on the toddler with the tighter crop, and it’s easier to see that they are in mid-jump with less distraction from the room walls and pillow on the ground.

If I were to take a photo like this, say of my daughter jumping on our bed, I might play around with the angle of the shot, getting down low on the ground and snapping the picture from below, or snapping it straight on looking at her face as she’s jumping. These would be fun variations of this photo’s sentiment.

Media Lab 03: Intense motocross action

“Two Riders at Motobros in Okeechobee, FL” by David Baker is licensed under © “All Rights Reserved 2022”

This image was taken of myself and another rider at Motobros Motocross park, located in Okeechobee, FL. The original image has two riders shown riding across some rollers on the track. I am the rider on the right side of image, aligned closer to the center of the original photo. I decided to crop the rider on the left from the photo to simplify the image and bring the rider on the right more into focus for the viewer.

“David Baker at Motobros in Okeechobee, FL” by David Baker is licensed under © “All Rights Reserved 2022”

To crop this photo I brought the focus towards the right side of the image and cropped the rider on the left out of the image. I followed the rule of thirds and placed the upper left grid line intersection across the riders chest. This tighter crop brought the rider closer to the viewer and allowed more focus on the riders eyes and hand position on the handlebars more prominent. It also made the roost off of the back tire more visible to the viewer.

Top of the World

I love this image because it shows a male figure standing on a tall building where he can see his surroundings below him, making him feel like he is top of the world. He is so high up in the building that the other buildings look so tiny. With how great the picture looked, I felt it could look even better. Some things I noticed are that the male subject is located at the center of the image and doesn’t really draw the attention of viewers of the image. Also, the space dedicated to the sky is also quite a bit excessive and eats quite a bit of the picture.

Top of the World by Adam Alhassan is licensed as free to use

I wanted to create an illusion from the picture where people who look at the picture can actually visualize him walking. Cropping the image using the rule of thirds let me accomplish that, this also drew more attention to his shadow to give it more depth. Now you can see the background around the male figure pop even more, giving it more depth. I also decided to reduce the space at the top of the picture as I thought it showed too much cloud space. Now it shows just a little and isn’t distracting to people looking at the picture.

Kevin Hart is a Guest Host on ESPN’s First Take

The Cast of First Take at Florida A&M University by. Christian Whitaker

ESPN’s First Take visited Florida A&M University in 2021. This picture shows the Frist Take cast LIVE on Air. It’s a behind-the-scenes shot with the Host Stephen A . Smith speaking to the camera. He has a guest host to his left and right. For the most part, he is in the center of the image. When looking at this picture, he’s the focal point.

Kevin Hart Enjoys His First Take Cofee Mug by. Christian Whitaker

In my derivative of the original image, I cropped in on the guest host Kevin Hart. By using the rule of thirds, he is to the left of the frame. The focal point is now on him as the other subjects are no longer in the image. Kevin is here smiling with his First Take coffee mug enjoying the show.

Once a Nole Always a Nole

I’ve been a student for the past 17 years of my life. It’s something that I’ve just become used to because I attended school for so long. There have been many ups and downs along the way. However, attending Florida State University impacted me the most. I’ve grown so much in the past five years in ways that I could never imagine. I am so thankful and blessed for my opportunity to attend this wonderful University. I decided to talk about the university because I love it so much.

One of my favorite memories at Florida State University was becoming a University Ambassador (also known as a tour guide) and being able to share my love and experiences with other prospective students and families. This position on campus was unlike any other. My coworkers were not just my coworkers but became a new family away from home.

I decided to edit a picture of the famous Wescott fountain because it is the last part where we end the tour of our beautiful campus. These experiences I had with random strangers on tour impacted me more than I would have thought. Each tour allowed me to reflect on my time spent at Florida State University due to the questions being asked on tour.

“Wonderful Wescott” by Cameron Chisolm is licensed under CC BY-NC 2.0

I wanted to focus on the fountain because it is a key tradition on campus as well as the tour. many may not know this but on your very last time giving a tour you get to be thrown in the fountain as a way to conclude your time being an ambassador. I think this is one of the coolest traditions ever. Unfortunately, I never got the chance to be thrown in due to COVID but hopefully one day I get the chance. Either way, I will always be proud to be a Nole.

Caught in the gaze of a sweet kitty cat

It took me a while to decide on a single picture but I settled on this one of my sister’s kitten for a few reasons:

“OG Pusheen” by Cynthia Moving, Copyright 2022
  1. Pusheen is very photogenic
  2. Pusheen is one of the few cats I know that will actually pose for a picture
  3. This is the picture of Pusheen I usually show people and, while it is very cute, it doesn’t quite capture that wide-eyed innocent look she has perfected. Pusheen does not seem to have a lot of thoughts in her cute little head, which is a breath of fresh air compared to my oldest cat who has eyes that have seen far too much.

Although the original image captures how small Pusheen once was, and instantly elevates the cute factor, it does not bring focus to those big eyes. I tried to follow the rule of three discussed in class by avoiding placing Pusheen in the absolute center. The effect changes Pusheen’s gaze. In the original image, it seems as though Pusheen may be staring off into space. The second image tightens up the focus and gives the impression that Pusheen is looking at the viewer instead and gives her an almost thoughtful gaze.

Don’t let her gaze decieve you. She is a criminal and she knows it.

Robots in Disguise

One evening last semester, we were working on a group project and started sharing where we live. “I love Naples!” My teammate said to me, “You have beautiful beaches.”

We better, I thought. My very affluent community spends a lot of money on them.

Being the gracious lady that I am, I held my tongue and said, “Thank you.” Literally that same week, I ended up having to stay home from work to deal with car issues. While it was being repaired, I decided to walk to the beach and remind myself that I had a lot of things to be grateful for.

I got to the beach and remembered that my county is in the middle of a beach regeneration project. My first thought was to take a picture to share with my classmate. So I found a somewhat safe spot and tried to take some pictures. However, it was bright and hard to see the screen of my phone. When I got home, the pictures looked bad, so I decided not to share them. Here is an example of one of the pictures:

It is a boring picture. Not only is my knee in the way, but the surreal experience of an oversized Tonka truck driving up and down the beach with a minion is lost.

This week, I decided to edit this picture using the Rule of Thirds. It was hard to pick between the two subjects, and how to position the image vertically. I finally came up with this:

I think this version not only better represents the enormity of the trucks that were rolling down the beach that day, but it gives me an opportunity to tell a much better story.

This was the day the Decepticons came for me.

Distraction

“Hide and seek” by Go-tea 郭天 is licensed under CC BY 2.0

I was looking for an image that I felt conveyed everyday life. I started looking for “hide and seek” themed pictures and stumbled across this one. I couldn’t really figure out why this was called hide and seek, outside of the fact that the person’s face was hidden by their hood, but I like the phone being the focal point of her place in the photo. At face value, I see a person who is selling food at a local market, with shipping supplies or storage boxes for her wares. Now with some tweaking…

“Distraction” by Joel Vasquez is licensed under CC BY 2.0

Voila! The image tells a different story. I called it “Distraction” because this perspective changes the story the image may convey to the viewer. For example, I now see someone surrounded by squalor but seeks respite from their situation via their phone, or their “distraction”. You could also see something less depressing, like someone cleaning out a storage unit and taking a break while their lunch cools off. Either way, cropping can be a powerful tool!

Flying Low to Alone

Before

“Flying Low” by Casey Brown is licensed under © “All Rights Reserved 2021”

After

“Flying Alone” by Casey Brown is licensed under © “All Rights Reserved 2022”

For me, selecting an image to crop was the hardest. I am a photographer by trade and when I take my photos, I take into account major cropping or rule of thirds into my photography in the camera. I wanted to use my own images, but most of them had already been cropped the way I like them to be, so I grabbed one of my photos from the trash. This was taken in Bar Harbor, Maine last summer. We were as this little cove, parked on the side of the road, literally. I wanted to get out and walk between the rocks when these two gulls decided to join us.

I cropped the bridge and the other bird out to change the story a little bit. Even though gulls can be social animals, I wanted to show off the markings on this particular gull. The bridge was distracting an didn’t make the place seem as magical as it could be.

Silver City

Silver City, SD by Matthew Stoklosa

This is my happy place when looking at this picture before cropping the photo. You see everything and there is no focus. You have the sky, the hills, the eagle’s nest, the pond, the house, and the ATV. There is a lot of different things to focus and you can get distracted by many different things going on in the picture.

Silver City, SD by Matthew Stoklosa

Now with the photo cropped its focus is on the house where I used to sleep after a long day of being out in the middle of nowhere. The ATV took me to all the new and different places. With the photo is cropped you can just focus on two different things the house and the ATV. Having cropped the picture shows a different story. Having the photo cropped I like that the house is more in focus. I learned a lot and did a lot in that house.