
Free to Flee

The original photo is a picture I took during a boat ride in Tampa. The original picture is nice however I wanted to capture more of the ocean and sun than I did the sky. Cropping this picture changed the focal point and made me able to focus on the things that I wanted to see. I normally try not to crop images because I am always afraid I’ll accidentally get rid of something important in the background.
The After Photo
I found it challenging to find a suitable picture that could tell a different story when following the rule of thirds. This exercise really made me think outside of the box. I went through so many pictures but only very few that could give me what I was looking for. In the original photo seen below, the people are the focal point of the image…so is the water and the sun. Cropping the image the way I did makes the image look like there is no water for miles hence the name “Long Walk to Water.” The original could very well be two people walking on the bank of a lake. They look almost like they are from the west with the woman behind having a handbag on her shoulder. Whereas the derivative I made looks like they are in the desert.
Original Photo
Original Image
Cropped Image
The original image shows two deer being surprised by a photographer during mealtime. The expression of the deer on the left shows a pronounced expression of surprise, while the other deer looks calmer and less animated. I wanted to crop the image on the left to see if the emotion conveyed by the image changed.
The rule of thirds was applied to the second image. The image was cropped at eye level, and unnecessary details were removed to simplify the image and increase focus on the subject of the image. However, some surrounding area adjacent to the subject was still left to give more context to the image.
Interestingly, the new image tells a different story all together. Instead of the deer being surprised by the presence of the photographer or disrupted in their mealtime, the image feels more relaxed and casual. The deer appears to be enjoying some alone time, engaging in his usual activities, unfazed by the intruder.
During my visit to my grandmother’s house in Japan, I took a few photos of areas I missed and some of the scenery that was incredibly different from the ones I see daily in Tampa. This was the first day back home in 10 years, outside my grandmother’s house, and I was excited to see lush mountains. This was taken in a car on my way to visit shopping malls where I had hung out in my younger years. This photo was cropped to exclude the grass/moss on the ground and the large barricade separating the pavement from the river below.
Now the image looks light, happy, and clean, similar to how the mountains make us feel.
I saw this picture and I thought the focal point should be the bird. I know that the parent/guardian intended for it to be the girl holding the bird. It looks like this great wilderness picture where we all can coexist together. This little bird, maybe it’s a finch, out in the snow and cold, somehow attracted to the little girl’s hand, there’s a story there we don’t have time for. What about the bird? The bird has its own story, how did it even get there in the first place, was it by itself or with other birds, what happened after this photograph was taken? We don’t have to ask those questions if we just zoom in and assume the bird was there. The original picture was so far out so I cropped the picture, made the bird the focus, and focused the picture, I also brightened the image and centered the light more on the bird.