Jane Barrager

Distraction

“Hide and seek” by Go-tea 郭天 is licensed under CC BY 2.0

I was looking for an image that I felt conveyed everyday life. I started looking for “hide and seek” themed pictures and stumbled across this one. I couldn’t really figure out why this was called hide and seek, outside of the fact that the person’s face was hidden by their hood, but I like the phone being the focal point of her place in the photo. At face value, I see a person who is selling food at a local market, with shipping supplies or storage boxes for her wares. Now with some tweaking…

“Distraction” by Joel Vasquez is licensed under CC BY 2.0

Voila! The image tells a different story. I called it “Distraction” because this perspective changes the story the image may convey to the viewer. For example, I now see someone surrounded by squalor but seeks respite from their situation via their phone, or their “distraction”. You could also see something less depressing, like someone cleaning out a storage unit and taking a break while their lunch cools off. Either way, cropping can be a powerful tool!

Flying Low to Alone

Before

“Flying Low” by Casey Brown is licensed under © “All Rights Reserved 2021”

After

“Flying Alone” by Casey Brown is licensed under © “All Rights Reserved 2022”

For me, selecting an image to crop was the hardest. I am a photographer by trade and when I take my photos, I take into account major cropping or rule of thirds into my photography in the camera. I wanted to use my own images, but most of them had already been cropped the way I like them to be, so I grabbed one of my photos from the trash. This was taken in Bar Harbor, Maine last summer. We were as this little cove, parked on the side of the road, literally. I wanted to get out and walk between the rocks when these two gulls decided to join us.

I cropped the bridge and the other bird out to change the story a little bit. Even though gulls can be social animals, I wanted to show off the markings on this particular gull. The bridge was distracting an didn’t make the place seem as magical as it could be.

Silver City

Silver City, SD by Matthew Stoklosa

This is my happy place when looking at this picture before cropping the photo. You see everything and there is no focus. You have the sky, the hills, the eagle’s nest, the pond, the house, and the ATV. There is a lot of different things to focus and you can get distracted by many different things going on in the picture.

Silver City, SD by Matthew Stoklosa

Now with the photo cropped its focus is on the house where I used to sleep after a long day of being out in the middle of nowhere. The ATV took me to all the new and different places. With the photo is cropped you can just focus on two different things the house and the ATV. Having cropped the picture shows a different story. Having the photo cropped I like that the house is more in focus. I learned a lot and did a lot in that house.

We didn’t need dialogue. We had faces.

I tend to gravitate towards a black and white color palette. Black and white images, black and white clothing. I think there is something very emotive and chic about focusing on shadows and relying on the composition. This is why designers tend to design logos in black and white first because you can focus on composition and not get distracted with color.

The original image is actually really nice. The composition creates an interested split between the bright, open section and the darkness of the cluster of people. It creates a strong sense of airy (sky/street) vs dense (people).

In my crop I wanted to focus in on the faces I actually found to be the most interesting, because when you close in on the man’s face, his facial features and expression are somewhat puzzling. is he angry? Confused? Annoyed by the kid? Then we get to the kid! That side eye is everything. Who’s he looking at?

There is a real narrative that comes forward when this image is cropped like this and you also get a much more constricted view of the man/child. His back is literally up against a wall and in both but his face and the space in front of him is much more limited.

Entire stories can come from one image even when we aren’t 100% sure what we’re seeing.

Is a Picture Worth a Thousand Words?

There is an old saying that says that a picture is worth a thousand words. I took that saying and firmly implanted it in my head. At any given time, there are so many things happening. In the photo below, we see a photo (presumably) of a man standing next to his rickshaw bicycle with motorbikes in front of him. The image is full of life and stories, way more than a thousand. There is so much going on. But what I chose to focus on is the underwear advertisement in the upper right hand corner.

Motorbike Rides” by Igor Ovsyannykov is licensed under CC0 1.0 Universal (CC0 1.0)
Public Domain Dedication

Where is the underwear advertisement? With a quick snip and a focus on the undergarments dangling from a tree branch among the power lines, we end up with a completely different story that we were initially given.

“Undies” by Christopher Stevenson is licensed under a CC0 1.0 Universal (CC0 1.0)
Public Domain Dedication

If you crop an image from an image, does it still have a thousand words? In this case, I’d say yes. By cropping the underwear and using grid-lines (on Pixlr.com) to put it in the upper third of the image, we are given millions of possible stories about the underwear, as opposed to the story of the man.

The Gaze

Photo by Tom Hills on Unsplash
“The Gaze” by Angela Wylie under a CC0 license

I was drawn to this image of a Boxer in the forest because I thought the setting was peaceful and contemplative. (I also have an affinity for floppy-eared Boxers because we have had several in the family.) Although the original image is impactful – the lighting focuses on the dog and the darker edges give good contrast and a sense of the space around the dog – I felt like it could benefit from some improvements. In the cropped version, I decentered the dog and placed more focus on him rather than the scene around him. It made sense to place him in the left lower quadrant to bring attention to the direction of his gaze. This placement also removed much of the foreground, which simplified the image and brought the dog closer. Although much of the forest is removed, one still gets a sense of the setting.

Sunset Road

Mirrored Sunset by halfrain is licensed under the Creative Commons License
Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 2.0 Generic CC BY-NC-SA 2.0

This picture shows that the photographer is driving in the car with the sunset behind them. It tells the audience that they are driving away from the sunset but still found it worthy to take a picture. Taking the picture in the mirror of the car frames the sunset in an interesting way.

Sunset Road by Emily Madril is licensed under the Creative Commons License Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 2.0 Generic CC BY-NY-SA 2.0

I cropped the picture this way because it tells a completely different story than the original. With this crop, the audience doesn’t have any context as to who took the picture, allowing for more interpretation. I also think it puts the focal point more on the actual sunset and less on the mirror of the car while still being able to tell that the photographer is close to the road.

Mariae (Virgin Mary)

(Before) Church in Milan, Italy by Daniel Enchev Attribution 2.0 Generic (CC BY 2.0)

“La Porta ( The Door) by Jillyann Sanchez-Herman 2022

Religion is very important part of my life as I grew up Catholic so when I came across this image I knew I found the one I wanted to use. The first photo taken by Daniel of a church in Milan, Italy was beautiful as you can tell them marble finishings and the gorgeous larger than life wooden doorway. So I decided to focus on the wooden doorway I wanted to show the cravings of what appears to be biblical scenes. This door that was simply made of wood but intricate in design. The black and white photo seems crisps and full of life as the people each in their own world doing mundane things like reading a map or just walking. One day I do hope to go back to Italy when we don’t have to worry about being infect with Covid and perhaps I can take my family to this church and tell them about the time I used this image for an assignment in class.

Looking in the eyes of Love

“Apple of my Eye” by Channetta Stafford is Copyright 2022″
“Apple of my Eye” by Channetta Stafford is Copyright 2022″

The top picture is a photo I captured of my son Elijah on portrait mode on my iPhone. He is enjoying tummy time and just really grasping the concept of holding his head up. Because the photo was taken on the bed, it had a lot of extra things on the sides and showed the wrinkles in the cover. I couldn’t really see his face very well so I wanted to fix that as well. Now I’m biased but I think he has the most gorgeous eyes ever and looking at the photo I knew I wanted to zoom in on his face and create some depth there.
With my cropped photo at the bottom, I used the rule of thirds and placed his face at the left intersection. I also used the vignette feature on the iPhone to darken the edges of the photo. to me the dark edges brings my eyes to the center of the photo. I also changed the filter and applied the vivid cool filter on the photo which gives it almost a blue overtone and dims down the light in the photo creating a more softer photo.

Sky High Castle

Swabian Castle by David Kracht is licensed under the Creative Commons License
Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 2.0 Generic (CC BY-NC-SA 2.0)
Sky High Castle by Austin Dudley is licensed under the Creative Commons License
Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 2.0 Generic (CC BY-NC-SA 2.0)

German castles are some of the most unique structures in the world. The ability to carve them into the side of a mountain or bring materials up to a remote mountain peak long before paved roads is certainly impressive. This photo is one example of the engineering feat. Nothing is wrong with the original as I believe the photographer was trying to capture the natural beauty the castle is surrounded by along with demonstrating the shear size of the structure. However, this photo is a lot to process with much detail everywhere. The main structure is centered in the middle of the frame with nothing specific focused on the one third. Also, there is a tourist on the left side of the frame which slightly takes away from the all natural feel.

In my crop, I decided to focus in on the details of the main structure, specifically the high contrast, tall, white lookout tower. This allowed my eyes to easily focus on something in the frame and see closer details of all the other structures. To crop this photo, I used the one third rule emphasizing my focal point on the white tower. This uncenters the photo and also simplifies some of the background as my focus was the tower and not the whole castle. Though you lose the mountain top feel, you can more easily see the large door protecting the castle on the bridge along with the ability to raise that bridge for protection. The ability to view these smaller details was the result of a tighter crop and high resolution photo.